The latest offering over at weekend wordsmith is the word “pallid.” Combined with the photo posted there, it really evoked some powerful, gut-wrenching memories for me. The word “pallid” doesn’t get used here, but it forms the underlying imagery, the words “pale” and “white” taking its place. I apologize if the colorful formatting makes this piece difficult to read, but this is how I pictured it in my head… If I knew a way to give the poem a black background, I would.
Cryptic
Ghost flesh, razor blade
Red script on a white page
Pale face, crimson scrawl
Hand print on a white wall
Nose bleed, empty eyes
Sunset in a pale sky
Answer, spreading thin
Question in her white skin
Red script on a white page
Pale face, crimson scrawl
Hand print on a white wall
Nose bleed, empty eyes
Sunset in a pale sky
Answer, spreading thin
Question in her white skin
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Wow this is beautifully done !!
Keep it up! Keep writing.
Here’s mine:
http://songofsea.wordpress.com/2009/09/13/705/
Dark. I love the rhythym, almost making this a chant.
hello,
thanks for the great quality of your blog, each time i come here, i’m amazed.
black hattitude.